Using ten words or less, write this sentence more concisely (aka: Streamline it!)
Many have made the wise observation that when a stone is in motion rolling down a hill or incline that that moving stone is not as likely to be covered all over with the kind of thick green moss that grows on stationary unmoving things and becomes a nuisance and suggests that those things haven’t moved in a long time and probably won’t move any time soon.
1. Edmodo Feedback Debrief/Discussion
2. Nevada school shooting discussion: Do these types of tragedies justify tighter gun control policies?
2. Why should we try to make our writing more concise?
3. Mini-Lesson: "Conciseness"
Humanities 11 Teacher at Animas High School